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"Enchantment"
  by Lushus


It’s like magic
Or some induced influence
When I hear you, like a snake to its charmer I want to dance to it
When I see your smile, I want to live for it because I melt with it
Its some sort of Enchantment
Its like a tingling in my spine
My love for you are divine
All mine?
My own Cirque De Soliel
With your psyche, I want to physically play
Make it my Busch Gardens, I wanna ride it, every ride, all day
I seem to be under a spell in a wonderful way
Oh, yes it’s seem like a complex brew
Think its some kind of good natured Voodoo
The way I am so into you
Enchantment
You have my emotions, thoughts, heart, and feelings captive
My once dormant heart is now active
Now I have more than one reason to live
More poetry than colors in me like ROY G BIV
Never knew all this was in me
Surprised with this incantation, I feel a Natural and Spiritual Connection
I just am under a serious Enchantment

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Date Submitted: Jun 13, 2007 (11:38 PM)
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comment icon  POEM RESPONSES (1)
Date: 06/16/07 (01:37 AM)
Author: Lushus
Poem Title: Enchantment II

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comment icon  COMMENTS (5)
  Unique Essense
06/23/07 (11:38 PM) 
nicely written...couldnt express that better myself ....these were my favortie lines "You have my emotions, thoughts, heart, and feelings captive My once dormant heart is now active Now I have more than one reason to live "

  11th Wonduh
06/17/07 (01:40 AM) 
i shoulda began at part one to compliment part two. this was a very smooth, very alluring thought. you expressed yourself quite well here. good thought

  PoiZen
06/14/07 (01:04 AM) 
Magical write....so lovely and expressively delicate....a winner

  Afroditee
06/14/07 (12:53 AM) 
"Surprised with this incantation..." I LIKE THAT!!! Love how u rounded it all together, and so wonderfully sumarised the sense of enchantment. Magical!

  KierraP
06/13/07 (11:59 PM) 
I love it! This was beautifully written and again great choice of song. Corrine is a favorite artist of mine! Gotta fav this too! Great write!

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