GS Poetry Home
Home
GS Blog
Media
Forum
Events
      Poems      Poets      Submit Poems      Collaboetry      SoulCasts     


 
GS Poetry
 
     
           

Your Ad Here

   
  arrow Lushus's PREVIOUS POEM Lushus's NEXT POEM arrow  
     
     
  
"Enchantment II"
  by Lushus
  - This Poem is a response to the poem Enchantment by Lushus


I have fallen under some kind of Enchantment
A Voluntary Entrapment of Emotions and i second the notion it seems to be Inducing a loyal devotion
Swimming past all these fish in the Ocean
Because my Warlock is a Merman
and still i don't understand
Does this enchanter have a plan with me?
Hey! I'd like a referee now that I have no guard blocking my heart
And still I suffer when we are apart
Wait! Holup! Does this have any side effects?
You know like Cracking or Exploding of something in your chest
Because I am under a New Kind of Enchantment
A hazily recall what clearly happened
Wait will I turn Ugly like Shrek or Fiona
Still I wonder about this wonderful persona
Allowing yself to be induced with no problema
And this charmer can be under my Umbrella
During any Stormy Weather
Don't mind being Enchanted forever
Still as i meet the future
I will stay with my Enchanting Inducer







© 2000-2008 GS Poetry. All rights reserved.
search icon
Date Submitted: Jun 16, 2007 (01:37 AM)
search icon
Viewed: 1257 times
user icon
Rating: Rating of 1Rating of 2Rating of 3Rating of 4Rating of 5Rating of 6Rating of 7Rating of 8Rating of 9Rating of 10 (30,370,168 Points)
user icon
Poem Favorited By: 1 Member
send the poem to friend
   
     
 
key Log In to rate this poem or add it to your favorites.
 



comment icon  POEM RESPONSES (0)

No poem responses yet. Click here to be the first!!

 


comment icon  COMMENTS (5)
  .Candice.(Roll...
10/03/07 (11:58 PM) 
yeah i like this one. something like the one i wrote but you wondered more in this than i did. i do love the song that plays along with it too nice added touch to the write.

  black rose
07/05/07 (01:42 PM) 
what a wonderful thought! U have captured it and painted it nicely with the picture u have selected...Nice!!!!!

  11th Wonduh
06/17/07 (01:32 AM) 
beautifully written. amazed at how you captured this thought.

  Miss LadyBug
06/16/07 (07:25 AM) 
The picture you have chose depicts everything that our write is about. The words jus so smoooooth and real i am going to have to fav this write.It is truely amazing the way you have put this piece together i was captured in the content alone

  azzurablue
06/16/07 (01:55 AM) 
Wow i like it ,this was an adorable write made me laugh a little.you really did a good job on this.

Page(s): 1 
key Log In to rate or comment on this poem.
     
     
  arrow Lushus's PREVIOUS POEM Lushus's NEXT POEM arrow  



 
Site Links
About GS Poetry
FAQs
Testimonials
GS Gold Membership
Links
Copyright Information
Contact Us
 
Site Features
Buy Credits
Promote GS
Events
Collaboetry
Soulcast
Poet Search
RSS icon RSS Feeds
 
GSoul Baby-Tees
GSoul Baby-Tees
Support GS and urban poetry by purchasing an official GSoul Baby-Tee. Order Now!
 
Donate
Help GS continue its efforts to maintain a creative and supportive poetry site. Any amount is welcomed and appreciated.
 



© GS Poetry 2000-2008.  All rights reserved. Terms of Use | Privacy