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"Emotions In The Wind"
  by Pookiejr


As the winds pierces around my body; I close my eyes
open my mind and I'm one with thee,
feeling so vulnerable right now let me be me.
Take me so high high to the point I never land,
super natural thinking; clarity is within my head.
Breathe in; breathe out; In my ears the wind shout,
up in through my nostrils; life travels different routes.
Out with relief; pain stuck marinated so steep,
rejuvenated with a clearer outlook; the world at my feet.
Pressure don't exist no more; like a plane I soar,
rebirthed like a phoenix; I walk with confidence; the sky is the floor.
Inhale all the wind in my system; exhale all pain; peace regained,
Let it rain on me and wash away all my sins satan I win,
burdens are lifted off my shoulders Im a go weigh-In.
On a scale thats shows right now my life is balance,
incarnated with grace and thanksgiving upgraded essence.
Bound free from me elevated and placed on a higher plateau,
swimming through the flowers on a country side meadow.
In a trans of earth's naturals; giving a moment to appreciate,
with the freight of loads in my mind; I learn to navigate.
Break through it feels like an eerie peace after a tornado,
experincing the wind; rain; and now the sun; I still grow.
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Date Submitted: Jul 30, 2008 (04:38 AM)
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  Ye Cre
07/30/08 (06:17 AM) 
From this write seems like you've found peace in your life..u know it was all 10's....Stay Blessed

  Scriptz
07/30/08 (05:42 AM) 
poet, this was marvellous!!! i actually read it twice because the first time the structure kinda threw me off and i was seeing the words but i wasn't really feeling them...so i had to exhale and set my mindframe and feeling right and read again. I came out feeling...lighter and admiring the carefree tone and spirituality of this piece and of you. I have a word of advice you can either use or disregard and i mean it in no offence but to help you because i see SO much potential, like you have the ...
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  African Queen
07/30/08 (05:41 AM) 
im loving the flow....and the use of words incredibe...

  touchdapearl2
07/30/08 (05:40 AM) 
actually i really felt the depths of the poem you was shooting for! which the sentiments showed the deepiness but overall it was a good right

  harley quinn/a...
07/30/08 (05:37 AM) 
I did enjoyed but felt if you ...broke up some of your sentiments it would enhance your piece more .. but overall nicely done

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