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"Emotions..."
  by Ms. Hollywood


Let this remain between us...
Our problems... let them just remain between us...
Cause getting opinions from those who dont know the business, aint gone make it the same between us....
And although my intellect is not equipped enough to put into words how i feel i thought i'd at least try.
I feel as though once i finally look into your eyes, you will then reassure me that everything is gone be alright..
Because I, yes I am feeling some type of way.
Praying in the long run we gone be together, wishing that my life would change...
And black folks don't hope, but I can only hope, on my words, I don't choke...cause the tears is real, the feelings here, and he's sincere..
Your sincere, Your so dear..... to me.....but now I see.. that your just not ready yet.
and as mine does, your heart just don't beat steady yet.
We can't move forward, if your excuses keep pulling us back.
As a woman, anything that you lack, I'm willing to take up the slack.
How can we grow together if your not ready to plant the seed?
Do you believe in us?....... in you?.......in me?
I wonder a lot if I'm wasting my time, or is what we got going on real?
Done played my position, On you I done waited years.
Don't know if you realize that everything you looking for you got it right here.
and for you, I swear to God I honestly care...
Confusing me, usually... never happens...naw.. not in my world.
I sat back and listened to you tell me how you loved another girl.
So how you think that make me feel?
How do you think that MADE me feel?
You won't open up to me, because maybe I guess you feel I"m too young to understand.
Maturity has no age, If you just let me, you I can comprehand.
Although I have no problem with it, I have to settle for young minded conversations because that's just what type of level you think that I'm on.
where that come from? i dont even know anymore.
Not a day goes by that I don't think about you...
Lay awake at night and just fall asleep and dream about you....
Sleepless nights, the sleep I fight, just to keep a flight...
and after this if you still don't think i'm mature enough to know you , then its you that doesn't undertand my insight..
Scared to give my heart, cause for you I'd probably give my soul.....
This is the realest shit... I.. ever wrote.
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Date Submitted: Jul 18, 2008 (08:34 PM)
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  Femi Dayo
08/15/08 (08:51 PM) 
wow this is fantastioc lol why didnt you tell me lol good write

  MR. BYRD
08/15/08 (07:31 PM) 
i feel you on this too...letting peps getting in the middle of relationships....and it can either make or break....continue to push that pen...10 stars and a standing ovation.....B-Y

  Peace & Sereni...
07/31/08 (01:10 AM) 
WOW THAT WAS GREAT - KEEP DOIN WAT U DO MARVELOUS

  angeleyes1
07/24/08 (06:49 PM) 
very nicely written lots og deep emotions in this one keep flowing with your words much love

  C.Whitson
07/24/08 (06:41 PM) 
good write..good write

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