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"Ecstasy"
  by Mz Marie


Windows open
wind blowing
your presence
brown sugar- vanilla aroma
dim lights and rose petal parts
silk sheets and estranged hearts

lets turn this night out
we waited long enough
for this..
secret rendezvous
sweet taboo

run your fingers through my hair
lick my earlobe
liquify my soul

Now...

turn the silk sheets back
and lay down flat on your back
I'm in control..
kissing and licking you
until your toes curl

body sweating; emotions running
on fire...
slowly i climb on and ride
I ride you like a motorcycle
slow and steady..
Then..
fast and ravenous

not stopping for a breath
my heart pounding out of my chest
YES.. YES...

Now...
Who is the best!

retrieve yourself
just for a moment..
soft whispers fill the air..
something like the vanilla aroma

switch positions..
so we can stay persistent
making love all night
until our bodies are on the next flight..
to ecstasy
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Date Submitted: Oct 20, 2008 (10:13 PM)
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  big josh
01/05/09 (08:09 PM) 
I can dig it, 10s ma much luv

  tripptucka
10/27/08 (12:09 PM) 
Whoa! I'm diggin this deeply

  LiL Chris 13
10/23/08 (12:40 PM) 
dam make love all night until our bodies are on the next flight.. to ecstasy I wanna to be on that flight but nice write tho

  Tha Scorpion
10/21/08 (05:45 PM) 
This was HOT, HOT, HOT!! You really caught me up in this piece babe!

  DaddysGirl
10/21/08 (05:07 PM) 
passionate & intense tone. starts off with a romantic, sensual tone and grows into raw sexiness. i enjoyed this one.

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