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"lets fuck part 2"
  by DEBOMILLIONZ


She looked at me with a look of guilt as if she did something wrong
I asked her to speak her mind tell me what’s going on
She said its nothing and just walk away
I grabbed her arm and said say what you have to say
She looked at me and started to cry
I told her to stop she said why
You need to know but I don’t know how to explain
It to you with out causing you a great deal of pain
Pain I said she must be going insane
Because I really didn’t care how she felt at all
To me she was just another booty call
She cried harder and I felt a little more curious
But since she’s not telling me I grew more furious
I ask her again to tell me what’s making you cry
I told her it was okay just another lie
She looked at me her eyes all teary
She moved further away and didn’t want to be near me
I asked her what you think I’m not gonna talk to you anymore
She said yes I ask what for as she walked towards the doors
She said I’ll call you then I’ll let you know
I really didn’t care I just wanted her to go
She gave me a hug and a kiss on the cheek
And she good bye really soft I guess it hard for her to speak
I look at the clock wanting for my damn phone to ring
So she could tell her sappy story or something
My phone rung I answered it
And pretended to give a shit
Cause I just got laid
And my day was already made
I enjoy my life style and nothing could change the way live
Until she said to me “ I’m sorry I’m HIV positive”
-debomillionz
(the story continues in collabo lets fuck part 3 )
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Date Submitted: Aug 19, 2008 (03:14 PM)
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  B-long
09/12/08 (08:13 PM) 
whoa... there wuz def a bigger twist to this then i expected. ha..nice work.

  Mindfully Driv...
09/12/08 (04:40 PM) 
damn...

  Mafiosa
09/12/08 (04:00 PM) 
damn pa u just keep gettin me with ur potry shit is on point

  ItzBr1tn3yBiit...
09/12/08 (03:25 PM) 
oh my god!!! is that a tru story?!?!? tahts crazy!!!

  Trinity Rivers
09/05/08 (01:33 AM) 
Hold up!!!....let me pick my bottom jaw up off the floor!!! Bout to read part 3. Im nervous....lol

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