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"Drunks"
  by baby wiggles


I cant stand to see people who dont know how to controll them selves
People who dont know when to stop
I know a person who drinks in front of her own daughter
And she dosent know how to controll it
She says she will never do anything to put her daughter in stake
But tell me why she got drunk at a party
And had the nerve to drive
Tell me if thats not puttin ya daughter in stake or not
It is so bad towards the point where she will make a fool of her self
Then shell jus pass out on the floor somewhere
And her baby will start cryin
Her baby dosent know whats goin on
But when shes older she will
And i dont want her to see her mama like that
I CANT STAND PEOPLE WHO DONT KNOW HOW TO CONTROLL THEM SELVES
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Date Submitted: Aug 21, 2008 (02:47 AM)
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  Chocolate City
08/22/08 (12:42 AM) 
now this is deep i can feel ur hatred to drunks.. im feelin this.. nicely expressed emotions

  Ticole
08/21/08 (03:21 AM) 
Damn dats deep Im feelin dis. Same question I wanted 2 kno when I was a lil gurl...Why Moma?

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