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"Dreams"
  by Gifted Pen


dreams are the stuff that my future's made of
my soul can feel weary but life is love
and loved life is the uniform of living love
and simple kisses of life expressed
are these blessings made manifest
when words went forth to this address
and God's own voice gave us breath
we inhalded deep and left our rest
for we rested in the sense
that we didn't exist
but, since rest is that of what is,
that means we needed an existence
However, God's intentions makes futile resistence
quintessentially into nothing at all
and everything he intends embodies everything and all
therefore, before he proves it to be
the universe, he prepares for that reality
and ideas made of hopes and positivity
are realized through the power of his divinity
then trickles of this holy massive ocean
leaks into our spirit and put us into motion
driven by devotion,
out of work we bring forth energy we glean
and from God's power, we manifest our dreams
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Date Submitted: Aug 27, 2008 (04:36 PM)
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  Fifikins
10/08/08 (02:01 PM) 
WOWWWWWWWWWWW beautiful. Truly, this is one to be respected! = D

  Shy Gyrl
09/13/08 (10:00 AM) 
**Shy contemplates the words written before her eyes as she finishes her muffin and mango juice. Wipes crumbs from face** Ahem this right here is what i call grandaddy wisdom. your talk is deep but the msg is simple. Lucky i have an attention span this morning i guess...but "...Gods intentions make futile resistance quintessentially into nothing at all and everything he intends embodies everything and all therefore, before he proves it to be the universe, he prepares for that reality and ideas m...
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  Geek with a ba...
09/10/08 (02:15 AM) 
wow i can tell youve been doing this for a while, i really enjoyed reading this, great write

  The Truf
08/28/08 (07:47 PM) 
i like the conversational flow to this one. just droppin knowledge heavy enough to crush a the peon mentality. i'm feelin this. this is that chilllin-on-the-block-with-the-old-knowledge type deal right here. the wordplay, alone, was beautiful. likin how you flipped words like "life is love and loved life is the uniform of living love" you used both life and love or some form of three times in a row but it made perfect sense beautifully worded. that takes talent. or a very gifted pen (pardon the ...
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  nephilim
08/28/08 (04:35 PM) 
This poem is real it spoke to me thanks for writing it keep it up

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