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"dreams"
  by B.R


these visions calm me
causing a phenomenom
which drives me forward

escaping the pain
finding a place to belong
dawning in these dreams

who are u to me
just one trying to wake me
its my right to dream

eternal slumber
trapped in a self made comma
now comes the nightmares


...to be continued...

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Date Submitted: Jul 24, 2008 (04:16 PM)
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comment icon  POEM RESPONSES (1)
Date: 07/24/08 (06:25 PM)
Author: B.R
Poem Title: nightmares

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comment icon  COMMENTS (6)
  danceluv08
08/22/08 (02:30 AM) 
i must agree ya pic is sick...makes the poem so clear of what you saying..great work

  L.edwards
07/25/08 (12:41 AM) 
wow the background was wild good one

  D.O.X.
07/24/08 (06:03 PM) 
your picture selections are ill...it really adds to your pieces

  ~* La Princesa...
07/24/08 (05:07 PM) 
**which drives me forward

  ~* La Princesa...
07/24/08 (05:06 PM) 
damn this poem really spoke to me i can relate hundered percent with this. " these visions calm me causing a phenomenom which me forward" that was a very powerful start-ten from me.

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