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"Don't Give Up"
  by Young Deeq


A few weeks ago, I was doing ma thing
until cupid came thru, down on his wings
I said I'd never settle down, and knocked on wood
then cupid did a fly by and got me good
So heres a story about how I fell in love &
how my heart began to pound like a beatbox
listen you can hear the sound of me skippin' down
the street for 50 miles around.
She was dis latin lady with a sexy frame petite
She was so hot that the level of the heat was raising
like the flow in a beat
So I tried to spit ma game
But ma game was weak
She liked rocker boys and I liked to write rhymes
But, I didn't give up
I Remained persistaent
and hit up ma boy cupid for a little assistance
I asked her, hey lets go get some icecream
but my hopes got melted
the feelin' of rejection, believe me
I Felt it
Almost gave up, thought my feelins were thru
til she started flirtin back, is she feelin' me too?
rumors started spreadin like some kinda disease!
That kid Quan is an angel well that girl is the tease!
Finally I got her number
gave her a call
talked for hours, like hey were not different at all!
Dam that was a deep fall
Cuz everydays valentines day when Im with you
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Date Submitted: Jun 28, 2008 (09:10 PM)
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  Von-C
12/19/08 (12:04 AM) 
wow... this is really cute. i love it!

  williesidney
12/14/08 (05:45 PM) 
Nice write keep using that gift you have too belss others ten stars.

  ladybugkk'sbab...
10/25/08 (04:52 AM) 
dat is cute n ya flow was hot u is good n i see y u said one day ya name will be respected u got skills 10 stars

  Dimplez
10/17/08 (01:53 PM) 
awww this is so sweet...and moral of the story, something everyone should learn, not to give up, remain persistant...very nice write man, had a nice flow and i love happy endings lol, keep doing your thing!

  D1Uadore305
09/20/08 (10:01 PM) 
this was sweet. i would love to have everyday im with someone be a valentines day.

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