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"dont drink to this"
  by openroad


stage 1:

how can anyone gulp that awful smelling drink
looks like piss,can faint me with that stink

feeling happy in moments but damaging body eventually
directly indirectly the suffering extends to the family

stage 2:

what do alchohol drinkers feel after having it
it might not be that hard a habit to quit

from early ages the liquour has been in the genes
almost 90% of people i know have it in their veins


stage 3:

lets feel what my friends do once they down it
i will not get addicted just a little spirit

start with beer or wine, no hard liquour for me
tea contains nicotine and coffee the caffeine


stage 4:

party is on, and everyone is having fun drinking
i got to company them with few pegs of whisky

you feel odd when you dont drink in an occassion
it doesn’t harms much and you are part of communication


stage 5:

oye buddy, you had your life’s first kiss
lets drink to that, an occasion it sure is

its raining, what a weather to drink rum
sun is scorching today, its beer’s turn


stage 6:

stealing a moment to gulp a drink
mouth freshner always in pocket to kill the stink

glad or sad, merry or worry, rainy or sunny
I hated the liquid once.. what an irony


now:

liver cries tears or blood in the veins blocks
rum, whisky, gin, vodka, beer or tequila shots
the addiction never stops....
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