Poem: distant echos - by B.R

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"distant echos"
by B.R

i hear the swift winds
echoing off the four walls
reflecting sounds waves

echos repeating
this verbal pain and passion
that is called..my life

bleeding thru walls
staining this poetry house
haunted bouncing sounds

trapped within the room
i cant find the way out..stuck
with the echos now

Date Submitted: Aug 16, 2008 (10:03 AM)

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Date: 08/16/08 (02:46 PM)

Author: smooch

Poem Title: i hear..... you

COMMENTS (19)

rekuhnize

11/07/08 (05:53 PM)

i get such a good vibe from this poem , so peaceful and serene .. i love it pa . 10 stars .

Drew2007

11/07/08 (02:18 PM)

WONDERFUL. LOVED THE MUSIC THAT WENT WITH IT. GREAT WRITE. 10 STARZ ND A FAV. KEEP EM COMIN. UNTIL NEXT TYME. DUECEZ.

Moey	11/07/08 (12:16 AM)

i liked that.nice write

^.Th3.Gh0ST.^

09/03/08 (06:02 PM)

Left me speechless for real..Great use of word play word use..Very deep and inside..Just really good..10 Stars Fer Reals .

Rukiya Faizah

08/23/08 (04:14 PM)

wow, i like this poem. took me on a little trip to somewhere beyond my regular existence. nice write.

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