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"Destined Failure"
  by Gifted Pen


ice
cold
heart
heartlessly
hard heartly
cursing
versely
rhythmically
tuning
crooning
spooning
thoughts
wickedly
motivated
x-rated
unstated
for reason
then seasons
change
rearrange
deranged
ideas
of destructive
ways
to slay
ourselves
in this blessed globe
strobe lights
effect
our dome heights
mental potential
limited
to unlimited failure
failing
in every
area
due to compacted
thoughts
bought
with a want
of ignorance
and easy offense
to common sense
casually
causing us
to tense
up
run away
from what
we need
and plead
on death's door
only to bleed
some more
b-cause death
is a false solution
like
guns
drug abuse
and physical
and ungodly revolutions
unswayed
but revelations
stationed
in Genesis to Galatians
all the way Apocalypsis,
Revelations
Alpha, Omega
thought
before
seeds were planted
before first rays
on earth, landed
and yet
we question the source
by walking around
with no remorse
give voice to my humility
and draw my sword
in the name of his creditability
take my stand
i must
for what is right
and what i dont know
will come in his light
but until i confess
i lie in failure's own nest
the outcome
is for sure
failure's success
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Date Submitted: Aug 08, 2008 (12:01 AM)
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  `Scriptixz
08/11/08 (08:00 AM) 
*lingers* this was intense! the way you wrote it felt...hurried and so i was reading it very fast paced- adding all the more to the dramatic tones! *slight smile* indeed philosophical but i found that it was metaphysical also. The opening- perfect setting!

  cotton candy
08/08/08 (09:50 PM) 
wow i wasz feelin thisz one.. yuu did ya thing again and yuu rocked it like alwaysz but imma be honest a i dont think yuu wasz ever a failure

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