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"Depths"
  by Tha Scorpion AKA "Mr. Make 'Em Cum"


Perception is what some see
Not neccesarily what's true
Can a man love women
For just being a woman?
For just being a friend?
Absolutely....

Why can't I love you
For just being the person
God created

For exhibiting
Compassion, caring
Charismatic love

Physical beauty
Aside, Pride as a MAN
Make me care deeper

Oh, your suface is FINE
Carnally so devine
You do stop time

But, there's so much more
I feel you on other levels
Not just as a satisfactory tool

Oh I know I may stimulate masses
But when the lights go out
The doors close, then what

When it's just us, You and I
Carrying on a conversation
The topics rarely, "go there"

We talk of bills and of beauty
We speak on love and of life
We share memories and heartaches

Things look different
On the outside looking in
That's why, he without sin....

Was ask to cast the first stone
Surface lookers only see the top
But what beneath is not known

Conversing with many ain't a crime
Harmless desires and daydreams collide
Animalistic urges fuel mankind in passion
But it's goes much deeper on the inside

The heart is a funny thing
It can be touched
As easily as it can be broken

But the depths of a relationship built
That, in it's purest essence
Gives my heart it's joy......

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Date Submitted: Sep 24, 2008 (10:34 AM)
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  Harmony07
11/13/08 (04:04 AM) 
i might have to respond to this one....:ponderz on that: i loved it Scorp!

  MzSpoon is bac...
09/24/08 (04:38 PM) 
Awwwwhhh...this was a nice write, and the admiration of another is a very powerful thing, especially when it's more than just the physical.

  The_Pheenix
09/24/08 (11:36 AM) 
Lovely

  LAB **Ms. Cool...
09/24/08 (10:48 AM) 
hmm. so far so good. Amazing piece, focusing on all the OTHER beauties in a woman... yet here i am selfishly waiting on your meltdown. LOL

  Dana Dane
09/24/08 (10:45 AM) 
Beautifully scribed! I think depth is what's missing from a lot of relationships, that's why they don't last. A pleasure to read!

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