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"Delectable"
  by Disoriented "Lushus" Diva
  - This Poem is a response to the poem Edible by One


Anywhere - 112

Devouring Perfect Portions

Deliciously Deserving of Dark Desires
Dangerously Dominating
Decisions to Do Unto others...
...as you would Devote to others

Desideratum Demanded
Dripping Delicacies
....Indulgent Duties...

Delectable Libido Satiated...

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Date Submitted: Oct 27, 2008 (12:31 AM)
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  11th Wonduh
12/24/08 (03:04 AM) 
damn right this is delectable, insatiable and sexy. and that chocolate backdrop gives off an erotic vibe as well. hot write

  MrsShakur1
10/28/08 (01:53 PM) 
It's nothin' like the taste of brown chocolate, and when i'm eatin' a hershey bar or Enjoyin' the Taste of my Husbands Chocolate Body, i'm in Chocolate Heaven. Anyway, keep doin' what you do. 10 stars...........

  .Mase Da Rula.
10/27/08 (02:57 PM) 
hmmmm funny I got an erotic joint by the same title..... nice.... the least of what Im thinkin.....wow.... great piece

  .Always.Catali...
10/27/08 (10:17 AM) 
:)....as only chocolate can do it!!!!....tell em ma!

  Blakfiya
10/27/08 (09:55 AM) 
oooh la la. This was delectable. I just imagine falling into that chocolate pool and eating until I get sick. Swimming in rich desire.

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