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"Defying Gravity...('Fro's Fall)"
  by Afroditee


it pulled me down.

errant force clawing at the core form,
once inert in its grave indifference…;

…now,
ever reluctant, (and ungraceful)
in its forced descent into the
u n k n o w n ...;

arid tongue swelling in throat's depth,
as
corded neck callously holds silent screams captive;

larynx closed,
as heart ever beats erratically
within the confined inner recesses
of tightened chest's cavity…;

blood pumping aggressively through reed thin vessels -
(already filled to capacity and ready to burst
from the pressure);

hands flailing,
grasping erratically for leverage:

...for a touch;

...a feel...

the security of you...,

whilst howling winds eagerly hiss and spit
at the stubborn strands of the ‘fro -
two dominant, immovable forces alternatively clashing
to affect and effect the velocity of the fall;



gradually, the body shifted...,
as panicked reaction merged with reason’s counteraction,
and slowed its supernatal descent,

with elegant lines of corded,
elongated muscle gradually emerging
from the initial disorganised fray;

toes gracefully pointed,
aimed at the pedestal where they once stood;

heart rate now calm,
and stabilised,
as loving goals are realised,
when fear of the fall is conquered…

back now gracefully arched as hands
imploringly stretch; reach…;
fingers pointed,
…aimed at their willing target;

the once deviant fall now transformed
to gravity defying acrobatics....,
taking flight on whims of fleeting fancy,
for the inevitable embrace of your arms’ security.

gravity, no longer the anti-force
when corporeal form mates with
centrifugal forces to speed the
descent into love's sheer madness;

relishing, and anticipating the fall...;

serene smile now emblazoned
across windswept face….

…sinewy muscle gaining momentum
avidly embracing newton’s laws

…anxious to hasten the descent...,

all, as I fall in love
with you.

****
'Fro

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Date Submitted: Jun 19, 2008 (11:07 PM)
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  SlimCutta
08/05/08 (12:40 AM) 
Ummm..Is someone in L O V E??? Ahem..just have to say..Wow..this is incredible..i dont know how you can describe what fallin in love feels like..ugh..i cant even put it into two words lol.

  Iroq
08/01/08 (03:47 PM) 
This is absolute brilliance! Comparing falling in love with hanging?? Hellified concept...and you freaked the "L" out of it. It's official...I'm a fan of your art. Much love. ~*IroquoisEclipse aka IROQ*~

  KRenee'
07/30/08 (08:31 PM) 
Wow... very well put! Your eloquence in each selected word just made this entire piece flow like none other! You did that! maddskilzz!.. [k.renee']

  **HOLLA**
07/30/08 (07:24 PM) 
WTF???????????????????????? Whew, Fro, mamasita, you are just amazing........... this was not only an imagery overload but the elegance in which you effortlessly displayed your passion was devine mama, as only you can... to love, to hate, to hate to love........ ugh!!!!!!!!! I miss you soooooooo much

  touchdapearl2
07/30/08 (07:12 PM) 
WOWWW this was so creativily done...the flow was on point this was indeed a very intrigueing write....

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