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"Dear Diary: Surrender unto Seduction"
  by Brizzy


Dear Diary: Surrender unto Seduction



Before he walks through the door, I know that he's there

For I inhale the intoxicating scent of the cologne he wears

He slowly but hastily enters the door

(He plus I equals love and lust galore)

He starts walking toward me, but I meet him half way

I put my arms around his neck, and he places his around my waist

I tremble at the touch of his perfectly formed hands

I want to move

but I'm stuck

all I can do is stand

Am I dreaming?

If so please pinch me so I can leave this trance

And return to this tale of perfect romance

Once I revert back to reality, I am back where I began

Standing in the middle of the room, hands still in place

Dormant in his sweet embrace

Then his tongue meets mine and they dance

Dance the dance of lovers'

Who is this stranger?

Just another thing yet to be discovered

Next to, "What will happen next in this story of two lovers"?

Now we stand breathless trapped in pure ecstasy

Then he takes me by the hand and leads the way

Future events no longer delayed

Raiment now upon the floor and we

Us upon the bed

Knowing not the thoughts going through one another's head

His snake then swivels into my oceany cavern

And

We

Reach euphoria

The question still left unanswered

"Who is this stranger"?

Is now to be revealed

This stranger is my lover

no longer concealed

~Brittany L. Jordan~

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Date Submitted: Jun 16, 2008 (04:38 AM)
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  UNDEFiNEDBEAUT...
06/25/08 (09:52 AM) 
"For I inhale the intoxicating scent of the cologne he wears He slowly but hastily enters the door He plus I equals love and lust galore" LOVE THAT LINE, THIS POEM IS HOT MAMA, FILLED WITH SO MUCH PASSION, 10 STARZ, KEEP EM COMIN

  ~KeiBeryDoughG...
06/23/08 (01:51 PM) 
I LUV DIS 1...

  Ezdozit
06/17/08 (02:08 PM) 
I love the words flow on this one puts me right inside the poetry I have to say this more than Ten stars look forward to more

  'x'GhOsT'x'
06/17/08 (03:31 AM) 
Wow very well descripted ha this was really good 10 stars for real though ya dig

  Rom3o
06/17/08 (01:11 AM) 
pssh... def on stage read.. i wish i had the pleasure of masterbatin my ears to this piece.. i like fuh real...::10::

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