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"Daydreamin'"
  by Lushus


Smiling to myself, looking at the ceiling
But moreso it seems, I am looking at nothing
But it is something
There is a depiction of a romantic diction
Between two lovers
Loving one another
Closely Lovely Passionately and Honestly
Some say I am loosing my mind
Because I am somewhere else all the time
Face displaying moods, but its all said in my eyes
Not saying a word but still illustrating emotions like some kind of mime
And still I lay here feeling sublime
Staying in silence and I seem to find, a place where life is at its best
And I must confess,
I am just here “Daydreamin and Thinkin of You”

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Date Submitted: Jun 17, 2007 (01:15 AM)
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  Magic101
10/10/07 (11:56 PM) 
WOW THIS IZ BEAUTIFUL. I LIKE THIS PIECE. AND THE MUSIC FITS PERFECT IT. GREAT JOB!

  --->ROXIE<---
06/17/07 (03:08 AM) 
I ABSOLUTELY LOVE THIS SONG...MARY J. DID A VERSION OF IT AND IT WAS ALMOST AS GOOD AS THA ORIGINAL...THIS WAS A BEAUTIFUL PIECE OF POETRY

  PoiZen
06/17/07 (02:26 AM) 
Love this....a truly well conceptualized and delivered piece of poetry.

  YoungKing07
06/17/07 (01:31 AM) 
yo thi s was hot fa real miss yo me and u should do a collabo some time but yo 10 starz on this right here

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