this is wonderfully pleasing to the eye... i'm with jay on the darkness thing not being bad necessarily....in this western hem. we equate darkness with doom.. but be reminded.. God was in darkness before creating.... "black" is basic... i'm ranting now, but I enjoyed overall.... this is a short trip into someones insides....

such short form of words yet soo much depth!!! your emotions ozz out of this write!!! it was amazing " rituals of smiles that fade with time IM GONE" damn ma its as if your in my mind. writing is the quickest way to heal all the retardedness of this world. lol. for me anyways. this was an AMAZING peice. i could relate soo much!! darkness sometimes could be a good thing. ;)

*looks down at Jay's comment* Yea I agree...gothica is very easily misunderstood as always been this wretched emotional place but I find much comfort and solace in it. Either way this is one way to look at gothica I suppose. I like the simplicity of this write as well as the background you chose. this was a good write. *smiles*

Hell you mean "good for a gothic write" Roxie?!?! I have somewhat of a different look when it comes to Emo/Gothic pieces...Although this piece was good in content, I have to tell you that darkness is not all about depressing writes, self hate and all that...To me...there is exquisit beauty in darkness...Sorta like the beauty in Vampires...lol...I know...Im crazy...but none the less...good solid piece ma

wowzers really u executed this title to the most magnifcent fareal great work sis plz do keep writing allowing me to read really enjoyed this darkness lol wow any whoo 10