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"Dark Rainbows"
  by LyricallyDamaged


Dark rainbows, colored my skies Grey.
What more could I say?

Don't you get it?

My eyes "rained" tears
and you know as rain clears...
colorful rainbows appear
to exemplify a new beginning

but unfortunately I was stuck in between Grey skies
and dark rainbows, which
kept the rainy tears flowing from my eyes
and allowed my lightning cries
to strike pain through my soul

I hate Dark rainbows!

All the color stripped out of my life
living, my past over and over again.

Reluctantly...

Dark rainbows painted past dark clouds
brought Cold stormy hearts
and bitchy temper---tantrums

This sort of weather was horrible, a natural disaster!
hurricanes, earthquakes, and snow storms nothing
comparable to dark rainbows
SO I enlist it way above; somewhere in the warning zone..
Although you feel safe at home
get ready to evacuate...

Because dark rainbows coloring skies Grey... Could only mean one thing.
Flooded eyes, lips flapping open and spraying words that'll sting
the hearts of the few standing.

Don't you get it?
............
What more should I say?
Dark rainbows colored my skies Grey

And I'm desperately trying to recover.. from this tragic natural Emotional disaster...
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Date Submitted: Nov 20, 2008 (03:49 PM)
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  Wrighter
01/01/09 (01:48 PM) 
DAMN I loved how it flowed ever so effortlessly- and I loved how you take something as a rainbow and made it a negative- very creative- but I prefer mine to have color- they represent me best :) lmaoo gotta fav this and give it ten stars ma xoxo wrighter

  Color Me Badd
11/29/08 (09:28 PM) 
this is really nice . . your words were well put together and thought about . & the concept iss great .

  KEITARO TAJ
11/23/08 (07:10 PM) 
OVERWHELMINGLY TOUCHING

  Ordained Misfi...
11/21/08 (04:48 PM) 
You stepped up to the plate, and rocked this challenge out the park... I love the concept

  Luvlee
11/21/08 (12:27 PM) 
oh wow this was an excellent concept i really enjoyed this write i never thought of communication like this one in forms of Dark rainbows yes i love pieces like this!!! nicely written Diva!

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