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"Dance Interrupted"
  by Chocolatezeus





Our love a Hurricane force
We swirled and held onto each other
Letting the powers flow

Our love intense
Heated glow
We made each other
Glow like Chernobyl

Till my dance partner
Abruptly left our floor
Quietly disappeared
Changed our flow

Only later did I know
That she found another
To dance with and for

My love made me support her anyway
Because true love for her
Couldn’t and wouldn’t wane
Chair dancing

But still the same
Reality came
I was jealous that she
Our sexy tango tandem
Gave him the things that
Were meant for me

She found negativity in him
That he wasn’t ready for
Her loving

She confided in me
Told me her feelings
How she regretted giving
Her loving to him
How it should have been me
Not him

I listened
Said nothing
There was no need to punish her
So I merely said ok
As I swallowed hard
My red hot jealousy

Wondering why
When I love you so
Began two stepping

As I now
Dance alone
With lingering memories of
Our dance as
One


From the chocolatezeus collection 7/20/08 ©
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Date Submitted: Jul 20, 2008 (03:08 PM)
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  bookitty
07/21/08 (05:33 PM) 
You are now my favorite poet man! I love your metaphors. You really have the ability to turn sight, sound, and feel into words in a way that few are able to portray. I loved this piece. I look forward to reading more from you.

  Amina1389 Defi...
07/20/08 (08:32 PM) 
Words can't express the power within your pen beloved. This is absolutely beautiful. So genuinely gifted you are. So bountiful is your heart. So aware are you of love and just how far it takes you. What amazes me more is how patient you are with love. You are compassion personafied, even if it only applies to the ones you love. It's there and it's enormous. Love always dear friend. ~Mina Mina~

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