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"Dance hall Guy"
  by Blakfiya


Nookie Tonight - Jamesy P
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Everybody knows
Who he is
Before he even says a word

Guy dressed up in a suit
At a T-shirt and jeans affair

Irritating air
Speaking too loudly
And touching a bit too much

…behind you when you’re dancing
making you stop like…

:::::::WTF?:::::::::


Around here,
we call him MJ
and be on some
“Beat it”

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Date Submitted: Nov 17, 2008 (07:48 PM)
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  BlessedOne
11/18/08 (11:52 AM) 
Ooh Wee, and his breath stank! Dirt under his fingernails. Please don't indulge me in my silliness today. *Remove smile off face, sit up straight*

  Magic101
11/18/08 (09:37 AM) 
*LOL* this one iz hilarious. dude looks like he's dressed up in the 70s *LOL* very well written. 10 starz

  Jody
11/18/08 (01:54 AM) 
lol, wake up with that plaid jacket... lol.

  Jody
11/18/08 (01:53 AM) 
lmao, he's the reason I carry mace... lmao, I'm just joking... but yeah he's at every club.... lol, that's why u gotta watch the alcohol intake... lol, no beer goggles! lol

  GOD_OF_WAR_7
11/17/08 (09:51 PM) 
hilarious queen. I've witnessed many clowns doing of the such. Crazy.......

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