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"damn dats messed up"
  by kinglita


Damn its really messed up...you said you were hurting and you said you were sick of pain i came into your life to take it all away. I started fallin for you I put you above the rest i made plans for our future now i gotta put em to rest. mmmm babygirl do you not understand the pain that i have now. its like im in the deep part of the pool and your lettin me drown. I feel the air escaping from my lungs everythings gettin so dark damn i think ima die and i forgot to get part of my heart....see when you left you took most of me with you i want it back but its like im addicted to you.....does it even matta im drowin right or are you gonna be my lifeguard and repair my heart....i dont want you to fix it with the usual moans and groans of our love at night when you pull my hair beggin me to hit it just right...but i want you to show me that you care show me that you'll be there show me that you kno that all my deepst secrets...show me that you kno how to take my soul and caress it....show me that u can take my mind and understand it....im still in the pool but i think i feel you pullin me out but right now all i can think is damn dats messed up wat u did to my heart my and sould wat u put me through and i still wont let go...naw dat aint messed up im messed up but we all messed up.....damn loves messed up


- KING
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Date Submitted: Apr 04, 2008 (10:51 AM)
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  SexyBabyRizz
05/05/08 (01:27 PM) 
this is a very nice write keep it up and by the way this is my fav

  J3$$!(@
05/05/08 (09:30 AM) 
and one of my fav poems

  Floetic
04/05/08 (04:16 PM) 
wow, very well put!! Loving it!!

  Dj M.E
04/04/08 (02:05 PM) 
DIS IS DEEP WIT MA KEEP ON DOIN UR THING IHALL62

  LostSoulNamedM...
04/04/08 (01:20 PM) 
You expressed yourself well ..nice write

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