Now how do you call me a fucked up individual for my shit last week but write this?...tell me that homie....but uh yeah anyway....shit is hot as usual...now do the one about the men that do this shit too...who yall think we got the term jump off from, ctfu!
Initially, I really liked the protaganist in this piece, and I wonder what made him hurt so much that he has become jaded and bitter. Sad fact is, he himself will pass this on to another victim, and the cycle will itself continue. Tragic, and such a sad state of life. The ending was sooooo cynical! Everytime that I read it, I cringe. Takes a DISTURBED mind to write something like that. (Hint...hint...)
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