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"Cyber Love"
  by Brizzy


Met you on the World Wide Web on a site where we both shared a common passion
Using words creatively to say the things that we felt needed to be expressed with much compassion
We started speaking but not literally though
Using a modern form of a typewriter to greet each other with a simple “Hello”
I began to see who you were and the way you thought
Your heart, mind and soul I sought
I wanted to know you thoroughly, your inside and out
I couldn’t to get to your heart with my looks, so I decided to take another route
I used my intelligence, my mind, to catch your attention
Oh…
And did I forget to mention?
What a handsome man you are
I just wish you weren’t so far
Only when I’m sleeping do my dreams become true
I see, feel, and smell you
Then I wake up and realize
That my senses were playing with my emotions
What I saw, felt, and smelled was nothing…
Nothing more than a figment of my deepest desire
You
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Date Submitted: Jul 27, 2008 (10:51 PM)
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  Gifted Pen
07/28/08 (12:34 PM) 
i loved this for a few reasons. having feelings for someone that is far away is not a new problem; so i love that issue being brought up. then there is the fact that it is over the net. now that is new and i like that aspect because it's a fairly new situation with an older custom. i do like the flow and the unfolding of the story. it also had me wondering if it wat real and who it was that you had affection for. so it has a mysterious quality and that is always a plus. all in all, it was entert...
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  LyricallyDamag...
07/27/08 (11:51 PM) 
Mhm..and this is actually something that happens.. >.< this is truly a ten start write. Love between screens harder to grasp. but for some reason the emotions shared and felt are still the same eh.. I really liked this.. nice

  B. Rose
07/27/08 (10:54 PM) 
Damn... thats how it be in most cases.. this was a hot piece though loved it...

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