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"CUT THE BULLSHIT!!"
  by TRU-IN-DEED


Hmm ....

In case heads think shit is sweet
I suppose it's time to remind you

I'm 3 times worse than Candyman
you just mention my name ONCE
and I'm right behind you

I see a lot of peeps talkin' real greasy
let me just inform you
you can get it ....

EASY

believe me ...

I been seein' all types of shit
which at first I wasn't gonna adress

But FUCK DAT!!

I'm only human I guess
and I refuse to rest
untill I get this off of my chest:

about a month or so ago
I read some joint
in which the "poet" was talkin' real thuggish

sayin' how he busts off his gun
and all that rubbish

I'm used to hearin' that fake shit in "rap"
so it didn't get to me that much at first
untill i read another "poet"
talkin' the same BULLSHIT in HIS verse

I'm like uhh ...ok what's really hood?
then i see another, yet another the two turned into four

untill it finally reached a point
where I couldn't take the shit no more

oh.... OH.. and yo i knew i was officially through
when I read some chic talkin' that shit too!!

I'm like oh hell nahh ..
now I'm truly finished!

so I click shorty's profile
expectin' to be some big manly brolic chic's image ....

Pffftt!!

Instead I see a cute chic
one of the most delicate lookin' chics I've ever seen
lookin' mad young
face looked all of eleven-teen

Ok ... let's get real for a sec ...
Shorty ... you're like 100 pounds soakin' wet
and you look like you're about 4 foot 9

the force of the average gunblast
would knock you on your ass
and crack your spine!

See Ya'll like to talk that gun jargon
and make it sound real slick when you spit

but ... I'm from harlem dawg
I been in close proximity to gun fire
and I had a gun pointed at me so trust me ...
from that angle
AIN'T NOTHIN' POETIC ABOUT THAT SHIT!

I call it how I see it ... you can call me an asshole
but i personally think you try to spit hard
to cover up your wack flow
I bet you ain't ready to let the gat blow
so cut the BULLshit, I'm intolerant to laxed flows

So please ...
do me a favor when you write
save the gun talk for your soon-to-be-trashed demos
cuz we all freestyle and thats cool
BUT WHO THE FUCK WANNA HEAR ABOUT GUNS ON A "POETRY" SITE!!!??

and i wish I could remember the names
of ya'll comical asses
so all of gs could see just how fraudulent your ass is

I allready told you fuckers
anything kept in the dark will be brought to light
and to all those so called wanna be gun-totin' "poets"

FUCK YOU AND GOOD NIGHT*



Faking The Funk - Main Source
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Date Submitted: Aug 16, 2008 (03:40 AM)
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comment icon  POEM RESPONSES (1)
Date: 08/16/08 (12:06 PM)
Author: Styles C
Poem Title: A killa - Really???

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comment icon  COMMENTS (33)
  Denese
09/14/08 (12:55 AM) 
thats pretty funny lol i've read a few on here like dat and yea...like da song says here, some are really faking the funk

  Manisha
08/31/08 (07:30 PM) 
LMAO That's write put em on blast! "BUT WHO THE FUCK WANNA HEAR ABOUT GUNS ON A "POETRY" SITE!!!??" Seriously?!

  Dawn
08/30/08 (09:08 AM) 
I'm clapping at my computer. I'm smiling because you are so lyrical with your words. I truly dig ya write. I feel you have a great talent with your poetry. I hope that you are getting out there and doing poetry nights out in harlem (if any). keep doing ya thang. I love visiting ya page.

  loyaltyb6
08/29/08 (10:25 PM) 
ah and this another of ur writes that shows we on the same level u know i love ya style as it is true n deed muah

  getchamndrite
08/27/08 (04:05 PM) 
lmao..real as hell..and talkin bout the chick cracked me up...flow was amazingly on point..applauds ur use of "rubbish" ;p you kno this one was fire..i aint gotta tell u

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