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"Cry Me A River"
  by Chocolate City
  - This Poem is a response to the poem Smiles Develop From Tears.... by DOMINICANPOET


Cry me a river..
And let it flow through my heart..
Rain on to my soul..

No sunshine no more..
Light blemishes in my eye..
Lord give me a sign..

In a water bed..
Is where I lay made from tears..
Sunshine.. Here? But where?

No where to be found..
So I lay in this puddle..
Looking for sunshine..
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Date Submitted: Oct 01, 2008 (09:53 PM)
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  Arcane
10/03/08 (03:34 PM) 
smh... This so me.. I can't even.. "Sunshine..here? But where?"<<---seems like I'm also blind to it.. "So I lay in this puddle.. Looking for sunshine".. Damn.. I'm feeling like that right now.

  Ordained Misfi...
10/02/08 (02:02 PM) 
You did take a different path with this one, but you still arrived at the same destination... which was to let the tears flow out

  leezymleezy
10/02/08 (01:23 AM) 
damm this is way different than my cry you a river poem....still hot

  DOMINICANPOET
10/01/08 (09:56 PM) 
Damn you took this to a completely different level and i loved it ten from me..

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