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"Crab Legs"
  by The Aquanaut


Freedom Of Poetic Expression is Law in the World Of Poetry

A Comment is a expression of how you feel about a poem
and all of us are free to do so
A poet tells you not to comment on another persons work
for whatever reason is a violation of said law
and the so called poet that acts on such a wish
is not a poet at all

You are the problem

To weak to stand on your own 2 and refuse the request
To scared to be casted out of the gossip loop
you instead distance yourself from the other poet?
Why? if he did nothing to you personally?
ok at least you took a side
but no
you go and betray the agreement with the first poet
by leaking information about his agenda to the other
therefore playing both sides of the fence
and when the drama starts your the first one to leave a neutral comment

Just as fake and fairweather as ever you are
You participate in blackballing a poet
then point the finger in secret
so the blackballer gets blackballed
and you skate away clean?
no gun was put to your head online
you chose to participate
both poets see you for what you are
and neither trust you
so which way will you lean now?

You are the spineless crabs
in the barrel that has become GS
trying to climb the ladder of treachery
that is now known as the Top Poets List
never realizing that your fellow crabs
will always unite to keep you from making it to the top rung

You are scavengers among men
your shell is a stepping stool for true poets
and when the time comes for you
to be backballed and boiled in hot water
no one at table 3 of Red Lobster
will have sympathy

Dedicated to the gossip crabs of GS
because without your participation
most of this GS BS could be avoided...

What up J Boogie! What up DOX! Taurus unity? Wow..lol

One...either you did it or you didn't...either way say something
or forever hold your pieces...
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Date Submitted: Jun 12, 2008 (02:59 AM)
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comment icon  POEM RESPONSES (1)
Date: 06/12/08 (04:56 AM)
Author: D.O.X.
Poem Title: Real Talk 2

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comment icon  COMMENTS (9)
  D.O.X.
06/19/08 (02:33 PM) 
lol.....after seeing this a second time....i see that this issue is one that kinfd of gets under your skin cause you really went off in the intor.....lmao.....i can imagine u sayin it aloud....too fuckin funny.....lmao

  Beautiful Soul
06/13/08 (05:00 PM) 
I was kinda wondering where your thoughts were when all this was being 'discussed'...loving the humor in it all...really you a funny dude

  TRU-IN-DEED
06/13/08 (04:15 PM) 
*Nods heads in agreement* yes hell muthafukin yes! lol Honestly, i don't know ALL the facts of the sitiation so all I can do is comment on the piece from a poetic standpoint...DOPENESS! This was spit with such conviction. You dropped it and i really can't say I disagree with anything you said here...well done. - T.I.D.

  LAB **Ms. Cool...
06/12/08 (04:55 PM) 
so the blackballer get blackballed and you scate away clean?" jesus , couldnt have been said any better.

  Guey2
06/12/08 (04:23 PM) 
From what i can see this is solid in its meaning man everybody should have this in their fav list real talk.

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