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"Could You Be Loved?"
  by Disoriented Diva


Could You Be Loved - Bob Marley and the Wailers

Could You Be Loved
As in

Flying hand in hand…to the own Directions of our winds
Or…Swimming into the beautiful blue of island like Oceans
Covering the Land we have created
Our own Island…

Taking the world by the reigns and reeking havoc
Together

As in…
Letting emotions be rocked by the boat…of
Sustainable love…

Could You Be Loved
As in…Letting fears free…and Jumping off a Plateau
Willingly to climb a new mountain…Conquering new heights
Creating new channels of blue in the sky…

Viewing beauty with eyes closed…Rosy Colored Moments
Through glasses…of truth.
Magnified to maximum potential…

Intimacy on loud speakers…and beating like an old school reggae jam…

Wrestling and kissing…and letting
The Wind blow and cover us…enjoying the Dawn
And the Shades of the Night…


Could you be loved?...
By someone like me.
That will love unconditionally
Discovering new feelings to be felt
And Researching old ones to make them innovated and new…

Could you be loved?
Naturally as deemed to be?
One Love….and Peace

As if High on Emotional Fumes…

Enjoying the Breeze
Lazily lying side by side…
Enjoying us…
Romantically rubbing off each other…
Habits and pet peeves becoming shared
One with nature’s rhythm…

Could you be Loved?
Until Hair colors change…and
Youth improves like fine wine…
Strength and Stability is our Guideline
Loyalty and trust is the rule…
You and I are the bridge…to a complex journey

Could you be loved?
Till exhaustion takes over…and
We refuse to let go of this one moment…
That…brought us to…this question.

Could you be loved?
The way I would love to love you…
Solely fixated on…
Your Happiness
And Defenses…while being your weakness
Your Rock while being…the softness.

Could you be loved…?
Till you Loved back?

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Date Submitted: Nov 16, 2008 (12:23 PM)
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  Unethical
11/16/08 (05:17 PM) 
damn. question of the day..could it be?

  Syndel
11/16/08 (02:14 PM) 
this brings so much to mind could I be loved I guess would have to find out if I thought love was worth it agan praying I would be willing to allow the door to be open got my mind working overtime at this momement

  quanda
11/16/08 (12:27 PM) 
i fell in love with this poem from the very first line...i thought about whether or not my relationship and the love we have fit this image...nice job on this 10starz

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