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"Cotton Mouth Summer Nites"
  by ...Da RiDdLeR F0rT...




..Some may not dig this…This is one of the cornerstones of Music…

…Introducing live @ the Cotton Mouth Club…

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Joyous jingles tingles receptive eardrums emanating songstress
…Jazzy Belle….

Jostling jolly single octaves whisks through smoke…whistling whims
Grins greatly graciously harmonizing jumping jive jibs gleefully

…Saturated…. Saxophone…
Sprinkling muffled interpretations greeting her delicate sopranos tone

Bodies dangle pendulum counterclockwise angled …crooning melodies
Melancholy meshing mixtures melding most super delightfully nicely

Check your worries at the door ..pick up music precisely pristine

….Twin Trumpets…
Blaring high bass syncopation surprisingly distinctively effortlessly

…Jazzy Belle…
Exemplifies vivaciously vocalist exhilarating breathtaking improvs

Sonic feminine fascinatingly wailing spanning locally & universally
…Hypnotism Hymns…

Sedated.. juke joint jamming crispy 4AM polish peeling nails tinkling on
…Black & white ivory keys…
Tapping lightly... she keeps the bop arrangement off cantor quite slightly

Feet tapping …infectious nodding heads insomniac audience wide awake
Olfactory coffee Jazzy Belle choral caffeine …pouring her tunes generously

…Cool cats…
…Sc..Sc..Sc…Scatting…
Moonlighting quartet helping the whiskey wine &‘shine go down smooth

…Fingers snapping …an encore??...

They can dig it….jam till the Sun trades skies with the moon
Summertime fades eclipsed by cigar smoke & distilled liquor

Lounging…in the Cotton Mouth..experience vintage sounds …loom

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…Appreciate the Greats…




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Date Submitted: Aug 20, 2008 (12:18 PM)
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  Blakfiya
08/20/08 (02:12 PM) 
This was just FANTASTIC. This joint jumped from the opening line to the ending statement. I just saw the who set up, heard the music, closed my eyes and it was good times. Vibes speaking music forcing ears to listen. "Tapping lightly... she keeps the bop arrangement off cantor quite slightly Feet tapping …infectious nodding heads insomniac audience wide awake".....fiya, my man!

  Disoriented Di...
08/20/08 (01:00 PM) 
this was beautiful fort...i love louis and ella so i woke up to the beauties of this sound...*smiles* a fave just cause this was beautiful

  --->ROXIE<---
08/20/08 (12:42 PM) 
4 SOME REASON AS I WAS READING THIS I THOUGHT OF THE OUTKAST SONG "JAZZYBELLE"...MAYBE CUZ IM AT WORK AND CANT HEAR THE AUDIO...THIS WAS BEAUTIFUL FORT...ALMOST FELT LIKE I WAS THERE...

  One
08/20/08 (12:40 PM) 
Yo...u set the scene magnificently...I felt it...it was smooth...this is a lovely laid back type a hotness...I feel it....got me swoonin over here...much love

  Tha Scorpion
08/20/08 (12:32 PM) 
I like this dawg, being a saxophonist and a jazz enthusiast, this takes a brotha WAY back, classic!

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