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"Cosmetics - Class(less) Clowns"
  by Afroditee
  - This Poem is a response to the poem Cosmetics by .candice.


“…never really
living
fresh faced
to reality…”

wanting knife
like incisions to
conceal congealed
conceived corporeal
flaws…
(belying the tenets of
natural law)

as garishly air-brushed
shadow
hovers over vacant
optical illusionary
light blue eyes,
(belying her chocolate
coated genetic ties)

blood red
lipstick stabbed
onto collagen
swollen bee
stung lips
(despised hereditary
offerings, but…
angelina made her
come to grips
with it)

stick figure
smiling vampishly
with colgate polished
enameled teeth,
ever spouting
reams of shallowed
bullshit

walks, stickin’ out
her chest
to isolate the form
and structure of her
proctor and gambled
breasts,

implanted,

ever donning aspects
of uniformity, and
constant cosmetic conformity,

content with the
consistent continuation
of created,
cosmopolitan
costumed class(less) clowns

****
'Fro

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Date Submitted: Apr 15, 2008 (03:31 PM)
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  JuztBe
05/20/08 (12:01 PM) 
WOW!!! im sitting here like she really went there on em this is hot the concept was amazing and the way u laid it down straight fiyah loved the way you worded this one here every line stood out speaking volumes of truth preach on sista!!

  SlimCutta
05/07/08 (08:08 PM) 
AHh...i caught this all the way through and yet once again you show how a person or even people can doll up and be as fake as plastic..wonderful fro.

  piss a mofo of...
05/02/08 (09:01 AM) 
beauty is in the eye of the beholder...but my eyes love..no SCREAM for natural!!! a little makeup is fine ..i guess...but not everyday or every other....let my eyes feast on the beauty that the MOST HIGH has given in all its splendor without being hidden behind the facade of decades of conditioning...stupendous Fro!

  **HOLLA**
04/25/08 (08:59 AM) 
WELL SHIT, I'LL TAKE THE IMPLANTS AND ANGELINA FOR $100 ALEX.............. LMFAO..... I FEEL YOU BUT ON THE FLIP SIDE OF IT IT'S THEIR BREAD AND BUTTER AND SO THEY GO TO ANY EXTREMES TO MAKE SURE THE MONEY IS RIGHT, I BET IF THEY COULD SING OR RAP THIS PROBABLY WOULDN'T BE CASE, WHO KNOWS... HOT DROP

  CocoLove
04/24/08 (10:09 PM) 
Beautifully done, queen. I agree. I'm a beautician by trade but love the natural look. I'd never cosmetically change anything...God made us all look different for a reason. Amazing write. 10 stars

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