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"cooling me off"
  by a fallen angel
  - This Poem is a response to the poem How to handle a Heat wave by Ezdozit


Feverish
as I lay here
Naked
blanketed
in thoughts of you
Mr. Reliever
cool me though
Saturate
All of me
I'm burning up
can't you see
Flood my mind
flow though out me
Make waves
of convulsions
crest my peeks
With trembling streams
Pulsating endlessly
Pounding my walls
Making me
Whale
Losing all sense
Of control
tidal waves
Rock my boat
All hands on deck
As you hit
the open waters
Upon the sea
Of released dreams
Cooling me off
With all of your heat

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Date Submitted: Aug 06, 2008 (02:15 PM)
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  Demon of Darkn...
08/06/08 (03:14 PM) 
SIMPLY BEAUTIFUL. NO OTHER WORDS CAN EVEN BEGIN TO EXPRESS MY THOUGHTS .. DK

  lil minter
08/06/08 (02:31 PM) 
I just love this poem because it seems like a fallen angel.

  Ezdozit
08/06/08 (02:22 PM) 
Wow nice response i love it

  B. Rose
08/06/08 (02:18 PM) 
Well damn... lol...

  KiNg-Go0B3r
08/06/08 (02:17 PM) 
mmmmmmmmm damn babii

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