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"Convictions of a Dangerous Mind"
  by Poetik Tearz


The pain in your mind
That reflect the struggles of your life
The stories that are held tight
In your tender eyes
The tears that you bled
The blood that you shed
The "what if's" instead
Like a needle for thread
The "I'll do anything"
The never ending promise ring
The trust that tomorrow brings
With the fear of growing wings
The attempts to leave
Feeling deceived
Based on disbeliefs
On the qui vive
The late night cries
The "I hate life"
The urge to die
With the hope to arise
The "why me?" question
The tingling depression
The eye-catching confessions
That lead to obsession
The second chance
The undeniable romance
The inspiration of the first dance
You had at first glance
The "I'm not worth it"
The chance to commit
The neglect to admit
And wishes to forget
The sustained bitterness
The twisted stress
The emotions expressed
That've caused you a mess
The pain that she brought
The fights that you fought
The thoughts that you thought
Cause she left you distraught
The lies that she told
The hatred that she molds
The heart that she holds
As the history unfolds
The trouble she caused
The ignorance exposed
The thoughts she imposed
Left you with a chapter to close
Now ask me again,
What do I love about you...
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Date Submitted: Jul 24, 2008 (02:21 AM)
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  Poo-pie
08/25/08 (11:21 AM) 
wow i like your style....reminds me of mine jk, but you paint a nice picture

  VeroniqaRoze
08/22/08 (04:21 PM) 
I had to read this a few times because it was just that good..10 stars

  BxGrL
08/19/08 (06:53 AM) 
ohhh my ......this is beautifully written. You have a gift and it shows. 10 stars.

  williesidney
08/19/08 (06:41 AM) 
You know you do have a special gift from God always use that I know you will another ten stars.

  Shaboogie
07/31/08 (05:13 PM) 
damn this was a dope drop. so much truth in this to even begin quioting i wouldn't know where to begin. keep writing! excellent job 10 stars!

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