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"Conflict in the Sky"
  by Harmony07
  - This Poem is a response to the poem an Astronomical Argument by Harmony07


one day the Starz got jealous of the Sun
bcuz Sun was the brightest of them all
so they staged a revolt
n refused to be the understudiez
in the Midnite Hour
so Sun refused to give Moon any light
and Moon disappeared

This is what we call a New Moon.
i wonder why itz not No Moon?

The sky goez black
yet we colorize Envy as green...

and when the Sun Rose the next day
as he alwayz doez
the sky was blue again
serenity at itz best in the midst of turmoil.
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Date Submitted: Oct 15, 2008 (04:23 PM)
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  StraY12
11/24/08 (06:52 PM) 
Daaaammmmnnnn! you showed the potency of your skills in this one, kinda reminds me of somethin' I did, I just never kept it cuz I thought it was lackin', but you did your thing I'm givin' you a round of applause a 10 and I'm favin' this

  angeleyes1
11/13/08 (11:02 AM) 
very beautiful piece of art right here love this one and great response keep them words flowing much love

  XPERIENCE
11/13/08 (04:30 AM) 
Hmmm i love the way this is going..."The sky goez black yet we colorize Envy as green... " i hope u dont mind if i use this as a saying! beautiful saying... i loved the way this went... very creative

  Princess Mia
11/13/08 (04:28 AM) 
This seems like a story that was told to me when I was little! (smile) Way to activate my creative mind.

  gangtalicious
11/01/08 (07:29 PM) 
nice write

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