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"comforts foods and drugs"
  by itsnmysoul


i have a remedy for your late night craving and middle day hunger pains
take note i cant heal but i can reileve the pain
that coats the inside of your stomach like thick sick acid
rain

call me tylenol or advil
cuz im so so so real.......
like ya name
life

i can bring those nice comfort food to ease ya hunger and mental starvation ....
call me rehad or a good meal...
you already knows my pills are to please not to tease
this is not a snack its a hunger
attack on your heart or ya brain
im whats missing a goooddd
meal...
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Date Submitted: Jun 27, 2007 (06:20 PM)
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  JuztBe
07/11/08 (08:57 AM) 
lol another well expressed piece love the way u step al lthe way in the character of whatever it is ur talking about this one was funny to me

  Almond Eyes -(...
07/04/08 (06:14 AM) 
I really like that you can view this poem many different ways. I took as you were saying that food, drugs, etc are just a crutch in life. Whatever the meaning, it was well written.

  Syndel
08/02/07 (12:42 PM) 
I like the word play the constant I will feed you the vibe was tight and the flow was direct very well written

  hanibull
07/30/07 (03:52 PM) 
i like it girl keep it up

  LaDii_R3aln3ss
07/03/07 (12:59 PM) 
wow.....now I'm hungry lol...this hott

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