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"Come through me"
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Lady come lay your head next to me
making us something similarly
poetry we symmetrically
stanzas connecting sexually
intersecting contextually
remastering we internally
shaping our outsides like pottery
lines inside our minds defining we
pitter pattering like little feet
foolishly wondering, pondering
putting together philosophies
polishing facts with artistry
advanced metaphors physically
manipulating mentalities
never replacing casually
constantly in between you & me
we can always keep consistency
secretly more than the shit you see

I love you lady...Please come through me

Casanova 70 - Air

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Date Submitted: Aug 14, 2008 (12:49 PM)
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comment icon  POEM RESPONSES (1)
Date: 08/14/08 (02:08 PM)
Author: Disoriented_Diva...(...
Poem Title: ...Within Us

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comment icon  COMMENTS (11)
  *Miss Toya*
08/15/08 (09:29 AM) 
wow...okay so i read this and had a different feeling in my chest afterward...you have a way with word...*clears throat* ten starz

  Demon of Darkn...
08/15/08 (03:03 AM) 
NICE EMOTIONAL EXPRESSION JUS HERE. DT BACKGROUND IS JUS RAW... AS EVERY YOUR WORDS ARE JUS INCREDIBLE.. DK

  Blakfiya
08/14/08 (11:26 PM) 
straight beautiful, nice sentiments. Very different.

  GOD_OF_WAR_7
08/14/08 (10:33 PM) 
Damn this was poettic creativity at it's best. Another fav.............

  .Always.Catali...
08/14/08 (08:15 PM) 
ok fine...I quit...I won't fron tno more...I love you too...shit I'm on my way to NJ now...damn...so much for keeping shit under wraps Rah...geesh....;)

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