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"Coconut Bars...PR Style"
  by Disorientatedly Diva-Esque JOKEtte...(Lushus)
  - This Poem is a response to the poem Skittles by ...Da RiDdLeR F0rT...


*so the boys hit me up for this i decided to give ya'll a new flavor guys...feel the spanishy-ness of me...Puerto Rican Style*
Sueño contigo - Jose Alberto el canario

Tropical Sweet-ness
Island Loving...Sand Romance
Soft, Creamy, Love Churned

*Sue-
ño
Con
ti
go*

White
and
Un
tain-
ted

Pas-
sion



*it means i Dream With You*
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Date Submitted: Aug 20, 2008 (01:33 PM)
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comment icon  POEM RESPONSES (1)
Date: 08/20/08 (03:03 PM)
Author: One
Poem Title: Chick-O-Sticks

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comment icon  COMMENTS (6)
  King.Shadow(Le...
08/21/08 (01:15 AM) 
thats a sick wordplay the concept was purely a masterpiece truely an excellent haiku 10 stars and a great imaginative background a fav

  Just Me...
08/20/08 (09:51 PM) 
Ahhhh... I liked this. And I knew what sueno contigo meant. Glad I payed attention in spanish class. lol. This was muy linda/ bonita. Whichever word you prefer. :)

  B. Rose
08/20/08 (04:59 PM) 
That hot... you should soulcast it seehow sexy your accent is yo... lol... nice one thogh...

  Jody
08/20/08 (04:10 PM) 
I like it and that background is absolutely beautiful! the purples, oh my gosh.

  One
08/20/08 (01:48 PM) 
Lmao@translations...lmao...I dig the twist.....and umm...yeah...I got ya coco nuts nigga!!!...lmao

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