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"Chopped and Screwed"
  by Disoriented "Lushus" Diva
  - This Poem is a response to the poem Fuck a Tear... by STYLES C.


Chopped & Skrewed - T-Pain featuring Ludacris
*By the Way: I ain't Nothing Like This, this is just Inspiration*

He...Broke Down...
Boulders of his Shoulder...

Picked Up Weight Upon Mine...
Didn't I Love His Kind....

Timbs and Swag,
NECKTIE...Looped Just Right...

This One Here...Was One of a Kind...
A Delicacy...To Savor, Ultimate Man Eater...Newly Acquired Victim...

As I...Peeled...His Defensive Layers...With "Sincere" Smiles
Running Game...Improved by He's that Ran it on me...

Not Once Believed...He Could Possibly be...True...
To His Word...When A Penny For Past He's Thoughts Cost Me...No Gain...But Detrimental Loss...

Stabbed in the Heart Ripping it To Shreds...It Went Through My Back and Left my Shoulder Dislocated...

He Would Know the Bitter Taste of Revenge...Slowly Coming To Realize
His Naivete...

Catering to Needs...Visualizing Blocked Passageways....Superman Willing
To Continuously Save the Day...

Cat and Mouse...Blindly Playing My Game.

Luring him in...Claws retracted...Instant Karma Granted...
As I left him...Timbs unlaced...Neck-Tie Loose
Disoriented and Dazed Within Thoughts...of Keen Analysis

Temptress Hits...
Truth Dispersed in the Air....
Blood Drops...Float in the air...

Globules...of His Emotions that once flowed...staining his Impeccable
Fuckitude...
Deliciously...Reminiscing on the Kiss..of Death...Emotional Sin...Staining his Bliss
Cockiness
Physical Perfection
Feeling like Carl Thomas "I Wish I Never Met Her"

Cursing My Name...
And Blames how a Prowess Made a Lion Tame

As I Took...These Ginsu Knives
To His Heart...Imprinted the Word Used

You Sir,
Have Officially Been
Chopped and Screwed

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Date Submitted: Oct 29, 2008 (12:54 AM)
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  --->ROXIE<---
11/16/08 (10:30 AM) 
this was very clever...i liked the play on words and the whole chopped and scewed meaning changing...i loved it!!!! u are so damn creative!

  shyeboogie
11/09/08 (01:29 AM) 
"You Sir, Have Officially Been Chopped and Screwed" lol you damn right

  Magic101
10/30/08 (11:46 PM) 
wow the concept here is sick... you killed this one... very hot piece, i enjoyed it. 10 starz

  One
10/29/08 (06:25 PM) 
lol...ic...u ummm...u screwy

  Isis sun
10/29/08 (09:44 AM) 
Loved the flow - the rawness is a lot to swallow for Wednesday *sigh*....great delivery..

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