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"childlike eyes blind"
  by sweetaT
  - This Poem is a response to the poem A Child's Eyes by Michae-Angele


Something changed and ill try and pin point it
I ahd dreams of a family that loved me for me
But hands around my throat snapped me back to my reality
There is no love in blood

My innocence broken from a man that is my blood
Laughter as i lay bleeding on the floor
There is no child like memories
Those innocent eyes of mine now blank an distorted

Glass being broken on my arms
Hateful words from a mother i dont kno
I stopped wishing for my happy ending
As a door slams in my face at age 13

I am homeless and being abused by many different men
So there is no child like humor or those pure eyes
I have to grow up no need for me to try

true story of me.......
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Date Submitted: Jul 23, 2008 (03:36 AM)
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  Miss Self Suff...
11/26/08 (05:08 PM) 
**wow...this was really sad.** keep your head up ma. blessing and prayers, sent your way! 10*s

  RUBY RED DBL R
11/12/08 (05:43 AM) 
I JUST WANT TO HUG YOU BECAUSE I REALLY IDENTIFY WITH THE WORDS IN THIS POEM, WOW IT WAS MAD INTENSE AND YOU REALLY BROUGHT BACK THINGS OF THE PAST THAT WE TRY TO BURY...... SOMETIME I THINK THAT FRIENDS ARE MORE FAMILY THAN YOUR OWN FAMILY, KEEP YOUR HEAD UP AND YOUR PEN MOVING.....

  Just Right
08/09/08 (07:02 PM) 
I've had a similar situation. I can feel pain and anguish when I read it, Strong emotion. If it wasn't true, you did a good job at portraying it.

  javae
08/09/08 (02:05 PM) 
real deep n powerful...

  **AdORE DA sTA...
07/26/08 (01:03 AM) 
mami..dat was da shit..you have a very powerful tone..and i commend you for bein brave enough to give us a piece of the real you...i love it 10**

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