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"Cheater"
  by Gifted Pen


when midnight moonlight twinkles toward twilight dawn
they flagrantly drink cups of affection away with song

singing praises of ecstasy through moans and groans
forgetting what joy he already has at home

and deeply filed goes those verses
because, with their sin, melody bears many curses

when heart is put in another part
and the part belongs to another heart

cheating begins feeling not like what it is
but just a function of hers and his

he wants to be faithful but not enough to walk away
his body wants to see what hers has to say

so with mystery and powerful passion
their flagrant flesh keeps on crashing

two souls brilliant with lavish lust
drink their fill of love in mistrust

how faithful can the unfaithful be
i'm unfaithful to you, he says, because i'm unfaithful to me

the horrible habit is a curse
and with longing stares, it is nursed

nursing a cursing 'cause curses are verses
of songs coming from cheaters

who moan in their ecstasy
excellently displaying the acts, vile

this was done in deliberate denial
succumbing to a feeling he's had for awhile

deep inside it used to stir
but that was he, now it's her

stirring a mysterious woman inside out
and turn a path into a wicked route

love taken and replaced with forsaken
makes true that all the good ones are taken

because cheaters flourish where lovers should
and in her desperation, she believed a cheater was good

nice is not love of all
for a wicked man can put on a mask
causing a lover to fall

so watch your heart as it beats for another
'cause the person you choose
could be a cheater undercover
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Date Submitted: Aug 03, 2008 (03:17 AM)
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  illest_PERSONA
09/18/08 (06:30 PM) 
Cheating.... is a character flaw. I really despise when people make it seem like it can't be helped like they fell VICTIM to the wants/needs/desires of the flesh. You know what you're doing or ABOUT to do. Life. Options. This or That... choices... we all have them. Nice poem or story of lust overriding logic.

  Juicy1on1
08/11/08 (09:44 AM) 
I loved this piece even though the topic was cheating it still came across peaceful. I enjoyed this alot.

  KaySoul
08/05/08 (11:14 AM) 
'but not good enough to walk away his body wants to see what her's has to say' That was soooooooo brilliantly writen...so much truth in 2 simple lines...you truely are gifted ;-)

  Gifted Pen
08/03/08 (04:43 PM) 
i wish i was a better writer but i try to do what i can.

  `Scriptixz
08/03/08 (04:05 AM) 
i know it's been awhile since i've come through and read your writes but i aint even phased- you never disappoint!!! *shakes head* you have captured your art so masterfully and your concepts are off the hook! i like these pieces of yours where you excercise your profound understanding of human behaviour/interaction- your vividness and metaphors are so point!

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