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"Change Your Mind"
  by Duebwa Loving


Change Your Mind


Intro: I know we’ve been through some things but I can make it alright if you just make up your mind shh. Don’t say a word just chance it and see how it goes


Verse I: baby girl I know our situation but I tell u what you never gave me a chance to show you what I’m made of all I think about is you all the time baby girl you stay on my mind just make up your mind


Chores (once after verse 1 then after 2 verse): just give me a chance (first time after verse 1 what..) if I tell you your the one for me baby will u change your mind.. if i tell u you stay in my thoughts baby will you change your mind if I tell you you’re the one for me baby will you change your mind if I tell you you’re beautiful baby tell me will you change your mind if I I step-in and out of line then baby will u change your mind


Verse II: girl I know we don’t know each other very well but baby you’re the one for me girl!!! I can’t keep u off of my mind baby girl i think about u all the time baby please make up your mind because your the one that i want in my life i dont knw wat i would do with out your love i need to knw just how you feel so i could figure out how to make this right


Back ground Chores: just give me a chance girl if I tell u you’re the one for me baby will you change your mind if i tell u just how i feel then maybe it will change your mind…….


Ending: you know all the things I say to you I mean you do stay on my mind shh… don’t talk just listen to wat im just trying to say to you do stay on my mind
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Date Submitted: Nov 21, 2007 (01:03 PM)
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  baby wiggles
11/22/07 (03:52 PM) 
i feel this one right here keep ya pen movin

  KEN-Y'S WIIFEY
11/21/07 (02:22 PM) 
NICE!!!I LOVEEE IT

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