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"“Change my last name…I want you to”"
  by Brizzy
  - This Poem is a response to the poem I Want To Change Your Last Name by The Coldest Tale


You’re right
Life is too hard to go about by yourself
That’s why you have me; I will be your help
I will be your strength and courage to keep you on your feet
Enemies will bow at your name
Surrender and retreat
God used Adam to make Eve
So that means you and I are one
I know that you are able to walk fearless through the night
Because I will be by your side, for I am your stars, moon, and sun
I will be there along with you to fight any battles that you may possess
My love for you, at any time, I will profess
I want to take a chance with you, to take our relationship further
I want to be with you forever and to our kids be a mother
From day one I knew that you were the man for me
And you do too
You have to agree
Baby I already know what you want there’s no need to say
I want you to change my last name not later, but now
Today
There is one thing that I need to know
If I say yes would you love me unconditionally?
And be willing to let our love flourish and grow?
I will be your everything
Will you be mine?
And be there for me through good and bad times?
You say that I will make you the happiest man
And to keep you happy I will do all that I can
So now our life of happiness will begin
Take this chance and change my last name
Then together our love we will proclaim
I Love You Too
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Date Submitted: Jun 16, 2008 (09:17 PM)
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comment icon  POEM RESPONSES (1)
Date: 06/17/08 (02:46 PM)
Author: The Coldest Tale
Poem Title: Please Say Yes

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comment icon  COMMENTS (7)
  ~KeiBeryDoughG...
06/23/08 (01:50 PM) 
U HAS DON IT AWL ON DIS 1

  Ezdozit
06/17/08 (02:09 PM) 
10 stars on this one I really like it you did the damn thing Such a nice piece Rings so true

  The Coldest Ta...
06/17/08 (01:03 PM) 
Wow!!! You blew me away! Its almost like our words were made as one. Great job! Got something to come back with....can you keep up? Lol

  Quite
06/17/08 (04:49 AM) 
good craft nice flow u got major skills

  'x'GhOsT'x'
06/17/08 (03:30 AM) 
Wow this is very good showing lots of love and comitment great job 10 stars for real

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