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"Censored."
  by ...Da Fort...


…Self righteous….

….scribing whatever sickness….
….came mentally transferred to pen…
((( a poet: an expresser for/of all: Webster’s definition )))

….Unbeknownst to him….
….he wasn’t allowed….

…..to ….

……….release his perspectives within………

….So he sat there….
….contemplating….
………observing…..
((( merely reading..enjoying.. poetic wordings )))

……how everyone was FREELY…..manipulating…

….Negative conations…..
……their thoughts were encouraged… by elevating…

….Seems a sexual domination….
……a revolution happened….
…..while he was in seclusion….

….He deducted aiight ‘cool’ ….
……….wrote a few releases of tension…

….pent up frustrations….

….Jokes were mistaken…
…taken… misused… for harshness verbatim….

….Too many rash verbs ….attracted…
….too much critic responsive actions….

…Presently…

…. labeled as the anomaly….

....WHO’S HE….

-….to speak freely….
…..without proper permission…..

….He needs to wait his turn….
…..his thoughts are governed…
…censored smitten….

….Switched….

…..over to spitting….
….sensitive…..

…..resistance… still appeared clear…
---As daylight---

…can’t write his wrongs--- right??...
((( ink purposely spilled his blotted skill )))

….though…

…. for everyone…
……the pen holds no prejudice…..

….goes in an ambidextrous manner….
….left to right….

---Handcuffed---
---Apprehended---

…sentences were sentenced to exile…

...HE’S DONE…
…so celebrate….

…exercise your censored …freedom of speech….

…it’ll only last for a little while…


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Date Submitted: Jun 10, 2008 (12:02 AM)
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  AzIz
06/12/08 (11:56 PM) 
Awesome write! This had a climbing/building effect of emotions for me. The background is great!

  Afroditee
06/11/08 (08:19 PM) 
I loved this. Teeming with all sorts of hidden connotations that you so cleverly injected, but the message is oh so very powerful, and I love the delivery. The seeming telling of a tale. Leaves us all to wonder: could that be me? How and is my pen being manipulated? Subject matter -writing for an audience, or for self?

  J@yBoogz••.•'¯...
06/10/08 (07:55 AM) 
I gotta say Fort..This ish is gettin tired my dude...(Real Talk homie)

  **HOLLA**
06/10/08 (01:13 AM) 
DUDE< YOUR JUST WICKED... AND I MENTIONED YOU IN MY NEW POEM FOR THAT REASON, LOL...

  .:I WILL NOT B...
06/10/08 (12:49 AM) 
really feeling this concept Fort. like the way you structured your write and the way you explained it all. very nicely written.

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