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"Can't Stop (( featuring JuJu Kangol ))"
  by imperfect beauTy


" and all the stupid things i do,
have absolutely no reflection on...
how i'd feel about you....how i feel oh ooooh...."


cantstopnumb1.wav - i.b.feat.JuJu



" cant stop...thinking about...." what he's thinking about
but the..one and possibly only thing i do know

is

that i truly love him so

and

..although
presently


i'm void
of the presence of he

i can still feel his touch
...when i sleep

and i

love him as much
..as when we first did meet

and

in my knees,
he still makes me weak


and..i know

playing a significant role
in the future is no easy feat

and, minimal,
is the hand i play in what's slated
to be fate
but at this rate

i still can do nothing
..other than wait

hope and pray

that somehow some way

..he manages to make
..his way back to me

for our sake
true love, unabashedly

and for every mistake

..made by both him and i
i wonder why
..we lie

together yet distant

stubborn hearts, resistant

..i miss him..

[[[ chorus ]]]

"cant stop...thinking about..." what he's thinking about
and i hope
..he knows this

and as i tighten my hold
on loves rope
..more numb, become of finger tips

but its him i miss

his gentle kiss
adoring glance

the passionate flames that flickered,
he made my eyes dance

...and
even amidst...

the weary times,
our palms have slipped

and things became estranged

some things, stay the same

and one thing...will always remain

cuz

some things..they never change

i....still....love....him

how i yearn, to again, sip from the fountain,
...of his essence

and, if only, "learned", we can make
... of these love lessons

and even amongst heartbreak
i ache
for him, to again, peer into souls brown windows


....and see..."we's'' reflections


and

for every stupid thing he does

surely,
it affected the "what was"

BUT
what IS


is the fact that


...I'M still....HIS

...for the takin...

'cause my heart, i cant forsake n'

for me,
for he,
for we,
i simply

..cant help but wait n'


i suppose only time will tell
if within his heart i'll eternally dwell

n'

with achy eyes, full w/desire to compromise,
they swell

n'

onto shattered dreams, they drip
and drop


i am ALWAYS thinking of him
ALWAYS, because i love him

and i wont....because

i cant


....stop.....


[[[[ chorus ]]]]


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Date Submitted: Aug 08, 2008 (03:09 PM)
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  Blakfiya
08/14/08 (10:23 PM) 
(standing Ovation!)........'strange! strange! You guys...:) First, Juju laid it down and i.b, I love the way you put down the words of just how it is. Can't help but wait sometimes when your thoughts focus on that other half night and day - you'll find away even if diversity may not make it easy. Love this, you two. Love ya'll.

  Jody
08/14/08 (06:17 PM) 
Beautiful voice, Juju, I always love the mixture of song and poetry... nice combination. There's no easy way to fall outta love. Nice, ib.

  porkchops
08/12/08 (06:35 PM) 
i want to say something no else has said but they took all the good ones this is another beautiful write

  touchdapearl2
08/12/08 (06:25 PM) 
wow that man is talented....girl you laid it out in this piece this was so sweet and hot!

  D Benitez
08/12/08 (08:51 AM) 
When i come to your page Man let me tell you its like i can relate u have NO idea THIS touched me ... beside i love that poem b y JuJu (beautiful voice) before i get into some of these lines This was amazing i never get disappointed when i come to your page First off "playing a significant role in the future is no easy feat and, minimal, is the hand i play in what's slated to be fate but at this rate i still can do nothing ..other than wait " Now these line just i could never ...
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