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"Can You Believe This!"
  by African Queen


she was lurking around him
gigling, touching and lingering too near
her filthy, clay covered face
and stench of cheap perfume...
she better get the stepping
before my fist meets with her face
kick her ass back to the prostitute land
Can you believe this...10 cent whore!!


Just had fun with this title not actually true....
(Title suggested by Lyrically Damaged)
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Date Submitted: Nov 20, 2008 (08:09 AM)
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  Nikkii*3
12/13/08 (05:57 AM) 
Haha. This is mad ! Loved it! =P Well done. Ten for sure!

  Jody
12/08/08 (01:50 AM) 
10cent whore? dang!!!! not even a quater water... lol.

  Dawn
12/05/08 (10:02 AM) 
Interesting piece in deed..I can believe....some women act like untammed dogs..boning everything in site....Love the poem

  mz_April
12/03/08 (08:17 AM) 
i like lol

  Swallowed Scro...
12/02/08 (09:07 PM) 
lol mama you should've left out the little note, it would've been way more fun lol "Her filthy clay covered face" *widens eyes* i don't know why but i pictured a cave women LOL how primitive! not a big fan of "clay" [foundation] so i found this extra funny

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