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"can ya follow the lines?"
  by a fallen angel


( pic deleted )
If I sketched it out
Could you follow the lines
Or do you need directions
For tracing my design
( pic deleted )
If I colored in
Would that help you out
Warm the tones
Expressionism on the lines
( pic deleted )
Or do work better
in black and white
With shades of gray
Highlighting the lines
( pic deleted )
I'll just give it to ya
In ...in living color
If ya can't figure it out
I don't know what to tell ya

Lol....imao

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Date Submitted: Aug 01, 2008 (11:38 AM)
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  GOODY2THABONE
08/10/08 (10:05 PM) 
goody like this one! ;)

  Gifted Pen
08/09/08 (12:13 AM) 
good gracious. i dont even know what to say.

  Isis sun
08/02/08 (10:37 PM) 
Lol!!! I do not know about ya'll but this was so damn hot -- I've never seen it done like this before (only you could pull this off the way you did)..oh, and nice pic btw *wink*..

  TRU-IN-DEED
08/01/08 (09:47 PM) 
umm okay. .... I am not mad at this lol lovin the pick lmaoo. Of course the write was hella creative mama. Damn....got me feelin' like i need to step up my creativity game right about now lol. I was loving every "line" of this (pun intended fa sho lol) Nicely done poet. So friggin creative. - T.I.D.

  LAB **Ms. Cool...
08/01/08 (04:15 PM) 
ok alota booty, in multi freakiness.. lol...

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