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"CAN I"
  by Juicy1on1


CAN I COMMENT ON YOUR POEM JUST BECAUSE I LIKE IT
CAN I VISIT YOUR PAGE EVEN THOUGH I WASN'T INVITED

CAN I COMMENT ON YOUR POEM BECAUSE IT WAS UPLIFTING
CAN I SEARCH YOUR PAGE AND SEE WHAT ELSE YOU'VE BEEN WRITING

CAN I COMMENT ON YOUR POEM BECAUSE IT WAS SO GOOD I BEGAN TO CRY
CAN I COMMENT ON YOUR POEM AND NOT HAVE TO EXPLAIN WHY

CAN I COMMENT ON YOUR POEM BECAUSE YOUR WORDS TOUCHED MY SOUL
CAN I COMMENT ON YOUR POEM BECAUSE MAYBE WHEN YOU WROTE IT THAT WAS YOUR GOAL

CAN I COMMENT ON YOUR POEM BECAUSE I SHARE YOUR VIEWS ON POLITICS
CAN I COMMENT ON YOUR POEM EVEN IF IT'S EROTIC

CAN I COMMENT ON YOUR POEM BECAUSE IT MADE ME SMILE
CAN I COMMENT ON YOUR POEM BECAUSE I LIKE YOUR WRITING STYLE

CAN I COMMENT ON MORE THAN ONE OF YOUR POEMS JUST BECAUSE THAT'S WHAT I WANT TO DO
CAN I COMMENT ON YOUR POEMS EVEN THOUGH I'M NOT APART OF YOUR GS CREW

CAN I COMMENT ON YOUR POEM BECAUSE I ADMIRE YOUR WORK
CAN I COMMENT ON YOUR POEM WITHOUT YOU THINKING I'M TRYING TO FLIRT

CAN I COMMENT ON YOUR POEMS WITHOUT IT BEING AN IMPOSITION
OR SHOULD I FIRST......... ASK FOR YOUR PERMISSION.
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Date Submitted: Nov 10, 2008 (01:44 AM)
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  *Miss Toya*
11/20/08 (11:25 AM) 
"CAN I COMMENT ON MORE THAN ONE OF YOUR POEMS JUST BECAUSE THAT'S WHAT I WANT TO DO CAN I COMMENT ON YOUR POEMS EVEN THOUGH I'M NOT APART OF YOUR GS CREW CAN I COMMENT ON YOUR POEM BECAUSE I ADMIRE YOUR WORK CAN I COMMENT ON YOUR POEM WITHOUT YOU THINKING I'M TRYING TO FLIRT" favi'ng this one...just because of that right there...you hit that right on the head miss lady

  Mz. Lyric
11/14/08 (01:57 AM) 
REALLY FEELIN THIS ONE. I LOVE THE SIGHT BUT I JUST WISH PEOPLE WOULD POST THEIR SCRIBES AND LEAVE THEM BE. NOT ASKING FOR VALIDATION OF THEIR WORK. I AM FEELIN THIS ONE THO, MA'AM. U MADE SENSE!

  BlackJesus13
11/12/08 (03:11 PM) 
Most people on this site need to adopt this state of mind. I don't think anyone, out of the seven who commented, took notice of the point(s) you attempted to make. If more these so-called poets took more time read other people's pieces (and truly comprehend them) instead of asking people to read theirs... Let's just say this: There'd be way more quality work on this site. Good read.

  Lil Vonne
11/12/08 (12:56 PM) 
I like this poem....this was cute and logical. I give this poem 10stars, it made me smile and laugh. This was very creative and I enjoyed it. If you can maam' can you check out my poem called God Gave Blacks An Angel/Barack Obama, can you rate and comment plz my sista. God Bless and congratulations! Much love, LV

  WIZ
11/12/08 (10:59 AM) 
CONGRADULATIONS POET OF THE DAY! LIKE SYNDEL SAYS, THATS WHY WE WRITE. FOR ME ITS THE COMMENTS AND LOVE THAT MAKE US O SO STRONGER! LETTING GO OF HOW WE THINK AND FEEL IS ONE OF THE GREATEST COMMUNICATIONS IN LIFE! GOD-BLESS!

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