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"Bye..."
  by Snickaz


Okay so you hurt me,
And I have to let you go,
I wasn't goin to tell you,
But i thought i should let you know,
Theres nothing left in this,
You made you point clear,
When you stepped out of this relationship,
You made me shed those unwanted tears,
They have become my bestfriend,
Because i'm hurting so bad,
Everything reminds me of you,
Damn its that bad,
I've fallen and now i have to get back up,
But its not that easy,
She was sleezy,
Why did u chose her over me,
I want you to be mine again,
But i can't let this happen twice,
Maybe we can be friends,
Because i'm just that nice,
Take my heart and stomp on it,
Thats what ou did,
And now you sayin you love me,
Its a little late for that kid,
I'm all screwed up in the head,
Look at what you did,
You've officially broken my heart,
Now where do i start?

CB-Say Goodbye(real instumental) - Chris Brown
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Date Submitted: Aug 15, 2008 (08:26 AM)
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  black rosesz
08/15/08 (07:21 PM) 
daMn....tHt was ghuD

  Ashley Nicole
08/15/08 (04:39 PM) 
I CAN RELATE TO THIS ON SO MANY LEVELS...JUST KEEP YA HEAD UP CUS THERE ARE PPL WHO WILL DIE TO SEE YOU FALL BOO...VERY GOOD WRITE MUC LOVE BUT ONE LOVE 10 STARSZ ;]

  DonVincenzo
08/15/08 (03:11 PM) 
i definitely can relate 2 that cuz i jus got out of a relationship that was like that. So 10 stars nd keep up the gud work.

  Chocolate City
08/15/08 (03:10 PM) 
this is very deep.. but u have to start with the mistakes u made.. i can feel u was sad in this poem and was bein real.. keeo it up

  icnicn2004
08/15/08 (03:06 PM) 
Wow. I can feel the sadness in this. You will be alright though. Keep your head up.

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