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"Bubbles"
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Seeking comfort in bubbles
when within time is troubled
dis comfort do in doubles
dumb mentality's muddled
meek caresses/mild cuddles
cannot simplify struggles

...Complexities arising?

New surprises seek bubbles
where big bullshit be fuddles
feelings boxed be tween rubble
beauty full be tween snuggles
argue meant for re buttal
after first signs of trouble

"Confusion blows like the breeze,
playing freeze tag----Love bubbles"


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Date Submitted: Nov 19, 2008 (05:04 PM)
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  XPERIENCE
12/03/08 (01:49 PM) 
i like bubbles...and stayin inside my own bubble is beautiful and they keep u outta trouble..well unless someone tries to pop it lol... i love the background.... i feel like a kid with ADD...im not sure where to look LOL...nice piece snuffy

  Ms. Sincerious
11/24/08 (12:56 PM) 
"meek caresses/mild cuddles cannot simplify struggles "... loved the concept and this left me with something to think about... thats always a good thing.

  Jody
11/20/08 (01:11 AM) 
stressing and in between all that finding some sort of relief... I dunno, feel like a mixture of adult issues with childhood pleasures.... bg is really beautiful too.

  MzSpoon is bac...
11/19/08 (08:59 PM) 
You make me want to revert to my childhood and play in some bubbles. This had a fun feeling to it.

  Syndel
11/19/08 (08:16 PM) 
like the feeling of just feeling good the look of bubbles and reminded of being a kid but what happens when they pop

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