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"Broken Heart & A Storm I Brewed"
  by leezymleezy


My troubled soul waits
Waiting for your arrival
I'm at your mercy

Lightning Strikes, We Meet!
A nervous wreck shoots throughout
But just let me speak

Your gloom hovers me
Thunderous roars are unmatched
Wrath flickers the sky

Surrounded by grey
Absorbing any pity
That may come my way

I reach out my hand
Expecting the slightest touch
Show me you still care

Immersed in teardrops
Fallen from above, (it's done)
At last......the noise stops



*A response to a poem "Scriptixz" wrote. I just wanna thank her for the inspiration*

Claire de Lune and Rain - Bagane
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Date Submitted: Aug 27, 2008 (07:09 PM)
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comment icon  POEM RESPONSES (1)
Date: 09/03/08 (03:18 PM)
Author: edshundra
Poem Title: judge

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comment icon  COMMENTS (3)
  stricklyfromth...
09/03/08 (02:21 PM) 
heart wrenching, when you read it its like you reminise. Look back on that perticular situation. The music just puts the icing on the cake.

  ASW
08/27/08 (08:03 PM) 
The title caught my eye and the piece kept my attention to the very end. I never would have thought of string haikus together to form one piece...what an innovative and thought provoking approach....peace

  Scriptixz
08/27/08 (07:41 PM) 
*teary eyed*...i know, i am such a sappy, emotional person *chuckles*...first, let me comment on the track selection- *sighs deeply and closes eyes* such haunting beauty. The rain effect creates that "wanting to be in the rain, holding beloved" feel, so letting the rain seep through *sighs*...now the piece *sighs deeply* you drew me in so effortlessly with that first stanza. I see the turmoil, the loss, the emptiness and then the lightning striking- meeting! awwwww...forgive me, i'm getting emot...
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