The title caught my eye and the piece kept my attention to the very end. I never would have thought of string haikus together to form one piece...what an innovative and thought provoking approach....peace
*teary eyed*...i know, i am such a sappy, emotional person *chuckles*...first, let me comment on the track selection- *sighs deeply and closes eyes* such haunting beauty. The rain effect creates that "wanting to be in the rain, holding beloved" feel, so letting the rain seep through *sighs*...now the piece *sighs deeply* you drew me in so effortlessly with that first stanza. I see the turmoil, the loss, the emptiness and then the lightning striking- meeting! awwwww...forgive me, i'm getting emot... [+]more
*teary eyed*...i know, i am such a sappy, emotional person *chuckles*...first, let me comment on the track selection- *sighs deeply and closes eyes* such haunting beauty. The rain effect creates that "wanting to be in the rain, holding beloved" feel, so letting the rain seep through *sighs*...now the piece *sighs deeply* you drew me in so effortlessly with that first stanza. I see the turmoil, the loss, the emptiness and then the lightning striking- meeting! awwwww...forgive me, i'm getting emotional LOL i can so relate to this! and i love how you made me picture the grey [it's actually one of my 2 favourite colours] giving it that gloomy, melancholy setting- just right! i love a tragic story *chuckles softly* and then with the last stanza "At last......the noise stops" *soft smile and exhales* beautiful poet, truly mesmerizing!!! [-]collapse